Blast from the past #revisited
In the unfathomable portion of the mind,
Lies a question,not so kind.
What is the real rule to success,did you ever mind?
Encouragement,art thou the reason?
Or Insult that seeds the poison!
Sources be mean or dear,
Ultimately success is what men care.
Hurt as much as you can,
Insult too as much as you can.
Alas!The seeds of success have already been sown.
But where are now those leaves of hatred?
Are they already blown?
Trumpets which once added colors to our friendship,
Now mourns on our fiendship.
Wish we could ever soften the path of our hardships!
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Perfect as always!!
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❤💖❤
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“Encouragement,art thou the reason?
Or Insult that seeds the poison!”
Love this line😄✌
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Thanx vaas 🎭
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😄✌
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Insult that seeds the poison ❤
Beautiful!
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Sure.. thank you
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Wonderful use of dichotomy! I do sadly find it relatable that on my path there are people that sometimes bring you down, but what can you do to a friend?
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But is he really a friend ??? That’s questionable
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Some people have difference ways of thinking and going about their lives, and of course we have both changed. I’m afraid it’s a bit hard for either of us to change as well as adapt to one another… Life still goes on as always, and high school is just high school I suppose.
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Actually expectations hurt… We expect and get hurt..
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That’s definitely true. Sometimes I wish things could just change for the better, or even dial back. But that would go against everything that is great at this current moment. Do you ever feel that way?
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Yes I too feel the same but we can only learn from our past , no force can help us to dial back and correct those mistakes.All we can do is learn and proceed .Every single day is a birthday after all…
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A perfect read this was.
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Thank you so much dear..
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Absolutely beautiful! 🙂
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Thank you so much
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Hey Sanchali!
Just nominated you for “One Lovely Blogger Award”!
Would love to see you participate 🙂
It’s upto you, after all.
Have a great day!
http://thehonestfabler.com/2017/04/28/one-lovely-blogger-award/
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Thank you Ashu… After a long hectic schedule got some relief today …. I will definitely do the award and return back to the town as before… Thank u again…
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Yay! Welcome back ❤
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Hey, I love the way you’ve laid out this poem. I’ll definitely be checking out the rest of them.
I think some people are encouraged to success by sweet words while for others, it’s the insults 🙂 that motivate them.
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Exactly…. Not always the path to success is sweet ,it’s the harshness that motivates you to defeat the foe..
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This was wonderful. I loved it!
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Thank you 💖
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