In the unfathomable portion of the mind,
Lies a question,not so kind.
What is the real rule to success,did you ever mind?
Encouragement,art thou the reason?
Or Insult that seeds the poison!
Sources be mean or dear,
Ultimately success is what men care.
Hurt as much as you can,
Insult too as much as you can.
Alas!The seeds of success have already been sown.
But where are now those leaves of hatred?
Are they already blown?
Trumpets which once added colors to our friendship,
Now mourns on our fiendship.
Wish we could ever soften the path of our hardships!
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© Sanchali07wanderer.
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This is so beautiful and meaningful!
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Thank you tonnes…💗
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Wow the rhymes gave an awesome flow! Loved the meaning of each line!
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beautiful… ❤
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😊😊
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Since I admire your work, I have chosen you to be one of the nominations for the following award: http://wp.me/p8iO5K-2z
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Am honored soumyadeep.I wil get back to it shortly.
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😇
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☺
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Wow! This is beautiful. Made me stop and reflect.
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Am glad u did..Thank you
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Great poem. Made me stop and think. 🙂
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Really? Am much overwhelmed…Thank you..
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You’re welcome!
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Wow! Hauntingly beautiful words.
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Thank you so much
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Reblogged this on Sanchali07wanderer and commented:
Blast from the past #revisited
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Hola Sanchali! I’ve nominated you for theCramm and The blogger Recognition award.
Congratulations!
Hope you participate. 🙂
https://thehonestfabler.wordpress.com/2017/04/04/awards-2/
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